考官最讨厌的十种雅思写作开头：超级啰嗦

　　开篇就要主题明了清晰，上来就啰啰嗦嗦表达不清，考官自然认为你的观点模糊，甚至不会表达。

　　比如：

　　写作主题 1

　　Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　案例：This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about
this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

　　写作主题 2

　　Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the
writing word as the sole source of information?

　　案例：Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I
have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses
internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more
and more important in our daily life.